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"I think we can make this work," she told him, looking over at him for a moment. "What do you think? Will it make you uncomfortable?"
He shifted when she woke, pulling her closer to him. His face turned a little, his hair brushing her skin.
She considered this for a moment before giving him that smile, her dimples exposed. "That's okay. Let's sleep for now. Try to get this bedroll...
(Zoop!) The next morning, Ben had moved closer to her still. His face was still in her neck, but his arms were also fully wrapped around her...
She looked up at him, tilting her head slightly. "Will you come with, or are you going to sleep?"
She would be able to feel how tense he was. However, as he slowly drifted off, he scooted closer to her, resting his forehead against her neck.
She lit the fire, her eyes closed as the flame lit up in front of her. She turned to look at him, taking the opposite end of the bedroll and...
He fell silent, his hand resting conservatively on her waist. Despite the fact that the air seemed clearer between them, he still seemed hesitant.
She looked down at the water before looking up at him, nodding. "Yeah," she said, beginning to clear a fire pit, kneeling on the ground.
"Sure," he agreed, closing his eyes. "We'll go tomorrow."
She frowned, obviously still worried, but continued towards the edge of the water.
"It's almost nighttime," he said, glancing out the window. "How much later were you thinking?"
She took his hand and squeezed it before letting go. "We'll set up camp quickly so you can sleep."
"It was good," he agreed. "The right mixture of endearing and obnoxious." He brushed her hair back, giving her a smile.
She looked up at him, frowning. "Are you okay?"
He smirked a little, the first smile she would have seen from him in a while. "You're getting better at flirting."
"I'm going to walk in the water," she decided, not even thinking about the distance. "I'm gonna walk in it."
"I'm serious," he said quietly, watching her. "You're the most beautiful person I've ever seen."
She was bouncing on her heels, clearly delighted. "This is so amazing. I'm so excited. It's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. Don't you...
He looked up at her, frowning. "You're so beautiful, Cal," he said quietly.
