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"of course!" Ember said, "What do you need done in the everfree forest?"
Lightning stretched a bit and pulled out her gun. She made sure the revolver was loaded before spinning the revolving barrel. "Let's get this...
"I'll gladly help you with whatever you need, Saul." Ember said with a smile.
"I'll go with you, Snow." Lightning said, "I'd enjoy the challenge."
(that's actually a pretty freakin awesome idea)
(that's just it, he simply and quickly solved the problem, which is a rather annoying to me. But as long as this doesn't happen often, I'm alright)
Lightning already had her revolver out, but she wasn't pointing it at anypony, "Well, Dark. Something happened, and just suddenly having blood on...
"Damn monsters." Fire said, spitting where the lake used to be. (done you think that's a bit TOO much power, Snow?)
Fire sent a pulse of fire at the attacking tenticle, effectively knocking it back before he went to buck it back into the lake. "One down!" he...
Firebreeze looked at the lake water while Ebon and Snow were dealing with the ground water. He saw something move around in the water, "looks...
"Stay away from the water!" Fire said, getting in between Ebon and the water, "The first lake is said to be the deadliest!"
"That's definatly what it felt like." Soon the group found a small lake in a treeless area. "This must be one of the lakes of fortune..." he...
"hold on." Fire said to Winter as he closed his eyes and began to focus. Suddenly, his hair turned to a weak fire, bring some light to their...
"I don't really know, Ebon. We're just sort of throwing a dart in the darkness and hoping it hits something." Fire turned to Winter, "I deal with...
"Alright," Firebreeze began, "let's get moving!" And so their descent into the forest began. None truly knew what was in store for them, but...
(alright, we'll try to make it so that you don't have to return to 4 more pages than before.)
"Meh," She began, "It's been really boring for me lately, I've been thinking about getting a job around town when I'm not racing. What's going on...
(initiating awkward reappearance) Ember saw both Snow and Saul talking. She hadn't seen them since they left the library, so she decided to walk...
The bang made Lightning jump in the air and she began to hover over the ground, "alrighty, then!" she began, "looks like we know where she is!"
"Well, where was Dark last time you saw her?" Lightning said to Snow.
