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"You don't got what it takes freak." Sal said to Narrow.
"If I try....he'll break my back."
"And don't trust ponies that say mystical creatures don't exist and ever call me a moron again....I drink your blood until your nothing but a...
"If anypony tries to control him....they get a brutal death."
Sal drained all the blood of the centaur he bit then he rushed to Tech as fast as the wind and he slapped Tech.
"That is....never."
"yes, inmortal blood sucking guy during the night, Normal pony by day and thats me." Sal then strech a centaurs neck and sinked his fangs into his...
"i use the word Vampire, to describe me."
sal turned back into a pony "Yes I was and this....sun queen sounds ugly."
the Magic Ninja stomped his hoof and he poofed us in the forest.
"HAHA, keep dreaming freak!" Sal said while flying to tech in his bat form.
Sal woke up to see The centaurs trashing tha building, he picked up a can and threw it at one of their head.
"Ok, I was joking."
Salvador was sleeping on top of a building in ponyville while cuddling his Scyth.
"Who knows he might be."
I like it and it seems alright to me:)
"I was referring to Jackie."
Hey Bena I posted for Equinox...sorry for the delay.
"Who do you think I'm referring to?" The Ninja asks.
Hug cause your the one to destroy the main character from The Hobit.