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Steel was awake, holding the mare he considered to be worth everything and more. "This mare is amazing. Celestia was right. Putting my feelings...
"How about the dragon lair?" Bolt suggested
(Yep. I assumed such XD. I like this site. The Moon part of it sucks o.o. Where are we cutting to?)
Bolt opened the door, and the edge of the forest welcomed the two. "So...where do you want to go?" Bolt asked
Steel blushed, but nodded. "I think we could do that." He said in a soft tone
"Alright. Let's go. We can walk into the Everfree wing of the palace!" Bolt remembered, leading Xeno downstairs and to the hallway leading to the...
Steel blushed. "Is this part of my payment?" He asked, smiling. "Come on, tell me what else you're thinking." He said a bit softer.
"Good. Let's go. Maybe we'll run into something interesting this time...and not get a broken wing..." Bolt said, cringing
"You can tell me." Steel said, looking up at Rose
Steel sighed happily as he relaxed. "You have something else in mind?" He asked softly
"Thank you!" Bolt said, straightening the robe. "Shall we depart?"
"Uh...m-maybe...l-like a m-massage?" Steel stuttered nervously
Steel blushed. "Well, my everything kind of hurts from running...think you could make that better?" Steel asked
"Maaybe." Bolt said. "Also because I used to wear a robe when I went on millitary strikes for my mom."
"Okay. How are you repaying me?" Steel asked curiously
"You don't owe me anything." Steel said, confused, but his mood rising.
Bolt put on a robe emblazoned with fire and smoke, the robe itself a dark black. "I haven't worn this yet. I feel like wearing it now." He said.
Steel felt even worse. "No! Don't be sad!" He begged.
Steel's face grew sad. He didn't get the joke. "Fighting is what I'm good at...how could you be better at my greatest skill than me?"
Bolt gently floated down and laid atop Xeno. "Bring that sword I gave you on our walk. I want to see you handle it." Bolt suggested. (I can't...
