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"Let's go ahead in. We need to be there. I c an hold them off from a vantage point like inside." Bolt sulked, heading inside.
"Let's go to the cave of the Mirror Pool. It's underground...it's got freaky water...and we can bring the guard force." Bolt said, summoning the...
"There's no running from this, is there?" Bolt asked sadly. "We're all dead, aren't we Flitter?"
Rev was still clinging to his life. "They did this to me...you can't do this...it's the end of all things." Rev said with his last breath....
"Flitter...I'm sorry. I'm breaking your heart. I don't mean to. You know I love you...but if Leaf and Brisk don't object to it...I'm going to...
Bolt ripped the door open. "How?"
"What leaf! Are you here to tell me I can't fight the order too? Get in here!" Bolt screamed in rage, opening the door.
"They can't beat me! Nopony can beat me! I've proven it Flitter! I..." He trailed helplessly, and maybe a bit delusional in tone. "If I can't...
Welcome, welcome. We'll accept you. And...we really can't make fun of you for being a brony, now can we?
"Flitter...I'm, not going to sit around and let them take you from me." Bolt said, hooves still around Flitter. Chrysalis warped into herself....
Bolt turned to notice Rev was gone. His eyes widened. "There's only one way...I'm reviving Chrysalis and the Dawn of Charge. Rev has to be off...
"Well...I have four alicorns up in the stars fighting them. Are you meaning to tell me that Black Star, Celestia, Cadence, and Luna lost?" He...
"I know what they're called. I don't know who they are and what they do. Are they a threat to everypony or just you and Brisk?" He asked, not...
"Flitter. You know I can protect you. What is The Order. Why are you so afraid of them?" Bolt asked, wrapping his arms comfortingly around Flitter.
"Flitter. I'm serious...are you okay?" Bolt nearly drilled. "Mom give her one of those healing potions. She looks really...loopy."
Bolt came in through the door. "Flitter...what the hell?" He laughed, happily because she was up. He ran to support her. "Are you feeling alright?"
"No. I knocked you out. Oh by the way, mission failed, Narrowleaf. I'm still alive." Bolt replied proudly, still holding the spell. "Brisk, I need...
Bolt touched down through the hole in the wall. "Brisk. Here." Bolt said, zapping her with a quick healing spell before walking over cautiously....
Bolt looked down, still holding the healing spell. "She's breathing steadily, no signs of slipping again. I'm gonna stay here until she wakes up."...
Go sit in the corner and think about what you did wrong XD