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(Fine by me, I'm kinda doing the same with Doctor Whooves, ya know, Tardis and all.)
Dark nodded to the two arrivals in greeting, and also to awnser Dark's question. (This could get confusing, two Dark's)
(Well, doesn't help that no one has posted anything that be truely responded to.)
(Meh, I could just have Winter call out trying to get Nioxen's attention, but that also probably would require a roll. You know hat, that's what...
(Only left behind by a handful of posts.) "Oh, its you." was all Julion said as he brushed past Jazzy, he had more pressing matters to deal with.
Winter decided that yelling to get Nioxen's attention would be the best way, so he called out, hoping that Nioxen would hear, "Nioxen! Where are...
"Oh, um, I'm the Doctor." Doctor Whooves replied to the strange pony in front of him.
Winter and Hunt saw the path that Nioxen took, so Winter set his torch alight and followed what they could see.
Julion had left Bloody 2 to oversee the intergration training and had climbed up to the top of a wooden watchtower, where he procured binoculars...
(Hill, not forest anymore, in case you didn't notice, I was doing a little tieing in with the acual fan-fic, had to make it work with my guys...
Julion sat across a table at a pony how was completely covered by a cloak, as custom to those who sought his services. "So what is this 'great...
Soon after the group had escaped the building, the helicopters, pegasi, and army suddenly turned tail and left. Dark looked at the rest of the...
Julion woke, as always, around 6 or 7 in the morning. He picked up a trumpet from inside his tent, and put it to his mouth, the resulting blast of...
Winter turned to Hunt in a flash, "Nioxen is gone!" he exclaimed.
Winter heard yelling off in the distance and looked up from the bush he was pruning berries off of. He noticed that the clearing was, well, clear....
(I'm not booting him for being insane, I'm not even booting him, I'm saying I might if he keeps breaking-up and destroying the storyline.)
(I've tried, HAND! Y U NO MAKE DRAWING LOOK AS GOOD AS MENTAL PICTURE!)
(I was two, that's why I had Julion go to bed.)
(Yes, but Pinkie is Pinkie, and no pony else can be like her. Seriously, is it even possibly to be like Pinkie?)
(Yea, and how are you able to even get out of it in the first place, your thousands of feet above the city in a completely enclosed room. Insanity...