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"Ya i'm fine, just focused on my thoughts." she gave a embarrassed grin and continued over the bridge before she made a fool of herself again.
"I hope your right." Charlie put the map away finally and looked around. They had gone maybe a few miles in if Charlie remembered correctly they...
"No i mean seriously there is no bridge." Charlie pointed to the spot where it should be and in that spot was a large X and a side note that says...
Charlie snatched back the map, "Ill hold on to this thank you." she read the map again and found the fork in the road but no bridge. "There isn't...
(Slow down, need to let the others catch up or at least post, something.) Charlie looked up from the map, "What? oh right well, i guess ill...
Charlie gave he map another look, turning it 360 trying to figure it out. She tilted it an odd way and twisted the paper slowly, "I think i got...
Charlie walked out of the bush again with a piece of paper she had found. "Look what i found.." she unrolled the scroll and it revealed a map. The...
"We are in the Everfree Forest." Charlie called back, a sudden rustle and Charlie had disappeared with out a sound. The forest went quiet and only...
(That sound more magic and fits in better I like that idea)
(Yes guns)
Faux retreated back into the room as the laughter grew louder. She hurried behind the others more against the back wall and leaned back against...
(Right. Carry on!)
Charlie turned off her lights and locked the after Esy headed out, she locked the door and did the same. They walked in silence then they reached...
I am so sorryT-T ill fix that next time I promise
(Sorry!) Charlie suddenly stopped, "oh no! I forgot something!" Before anypony could react Charlie was already half way to her house. She busted...
(Totally ruined my night!\T-T/)
Charlie sat behind them listening to there conversation shakeinf her head. "V is right." She said to herself.
"Lets make sure we don't run into my friend London..." Charlie continued ahead pulling out a string of normal piano keys, ready to attack anything...
"We cant, non of us know where shes at!" They reached the opening of the Everfree Forest and had stopped in a circle. Charlie could barely see her...
Charlie slowed down to a walk and watched Dune walk ahead, "Well i do.." she said softly to herself.