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"W-what do you mean?I don't have anything..."
This is too~
"What would you like, then?"-He asked, kissing her.
"Okay!Okay!I lose! Stop it!"-CM said, laughing louder than ever.
Bob got killed by another Bob in a fight. Bob got killed by another Bob in a fight (Get it?)
"Hey!That's cheating!"-CM said, laughing as she did that, and tries to tickles her harder-"Surrender!"
Ouch. Yep.It ruins.
"How you feel now, huh?"-CM said, still tickling her.
"So, you want to play a tickle game, huh?" CM used the chance to flip over it, and tickles Star. "Not so strong now, huh?"-CM said, smiling.
"Hey!It tickles.Stop it!"-CM said, laughing.
"Aww~Thanks."-CM said, nuzzling her back.
"Thanks."-CM said, giggling, blushing too. (A question:Can I use the OC profile that I played with you to RP with the others, or I have to...
Can you tell what will improve after they write Spike out?
"Do you...want to be my girlfriend?"-He asked, small, but enough for Star to hear it.
You just insulted all of us as we reply to the theard, trying to help him/her. And we're going off-topic.Say something useful.
CM kissed her another time as she says that. "It's true...Ummm....Can I ask you a question, Star?"
Like you, right? I was recommending him to talk to people in real life too, FYI.
CM hugged her back, gives her a little kiss. "I really like you..."-He whispered. (Really sorry tho.RPing with you is fun as hell)
Alright.I will do it. But writing Spike out would be useless, and it will affect the development of other character, such as Twilight, seriously.
That's what I say lol.