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"Maybe this?", shade suggested, then kissed timestopper passionately, with her forelegs around him
"Is there anything I can do to help you get your mind off it?"
^ needs know that a parson isn't very good lol
"You shouldn't let it hinder you, please don't...", shade implored
"I just don't want you to feel bad, for any reason...", shade replies, hugging him tighter than before
"Please stop, I'll do something for you, anything...", shade replied alittle sadder than before
"Just please stop, I don't want you to be mad at yourself...", shade sadly says
"You're not ignorant!", shade said sternly, then said softer,"you're a very smart stallion."
^ should know there's three 'should know's in a row
"What?", shade asked, stil hugging timestopper
If 'twas an option I'd choose it, but it isn't so, I'm stickin' with Florida
"They're all in a better place now...", shade said, hugging timestopper
"Well, I'm sure you did your best to protect each of them..."
Just ditch Florida
"Are they all from here?"
"That's a lot of dog tags...", shade whispered
... Yeah, that makes sense, seeing how I was taking about Florida, & how it's already hanging off the edge of the USA...
Shade looks inside, them realizes she was still wearing timestopper's, & quickly takes it off & hides it
^ should know, sorry if you don't like this, I like your profile pic, better than both your new, & old avatar
"Alright...", shade replied, going over to collect the shurikens she threw
