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"Yeah, like I'm gonna believe that, just tell me...", shade demanded, hopping into the bed
"Why are you blushing?", shade giggled, putting her things atop the dresser
^ shouldn't make assumptions
Usually I don't party...
When shade got into the room she took of her cloak, armor, & sheathes, & asked,"where should I put these?"
"Alright, let's, shall we?", shade asked
"So, are you ready to go?"
Banned because, NERD POWA!!!
"Y-yeah...", Xeno says, blushing, & pulling bolt into a hug
Shade giggles, then says,"yeah, I'm feeling alittle drowsy..."
"So, which town, or city, do you want to go to first?"
"No you aren't, besides, it was kinda cute.", Xeno says giggling
"Well, we made it to the sewers, we were attacked by some hoofmanians, your uncle got stabbed, we defeated them, but timestopper was too weak to...
"Thank you, lolli."
"Why are you sad?", Xeno asked, cocking her head
(You wanna jump cut?) "well, I snuck up to the top of a hospital, opened a closet in search of supplies, & your uncle in the closet, although,...
"You said that we should go.", wings chuckles
"Come on out all the way..."
(Back!) "are you sure, it's a long story..."
"Yeah, we met there..." (Alright, be back in about 40 mins...)