Separate names with a comma.
"I'm pretty sure it will. One of the princesses will come, if that doesn't draw attention, I don't know what will do it." He said smiling.
He left the bags on the table. "Looks like you are finished." He said smiling.
She sighed. "Alright dad." She said as she jumped off his back. "Dad?" Lightning was more confused now.
Forgot that detail, so I'll just delete that part.
"I'm... back..." he said to Sapphire oppening the door.
Darky was walking behind Lunis with Luna in his back. "Hi Lunis." He said "Hi Dar-" he suddenly stopped when he saw him with those clothes and...
Lightning was in the dock waiting for them, he had also a big new foe Darky and was eager to tell him as soon as posible.
After a pair of hours he came back with some bags full of stuff for the party. He was using his magic to carry them.
I will change it later, I'm usually bad with names and I had to fill that one out with something.
Wait, am I approved or not?
"If you want to." He said smiling. "Anyways, I"ll be back soon." He said kissing her cheek and walking out of her house.
"I'll go and buy everything." Lightning said to Sapphire.
"I know ir will." Lightning replied. "Now, we need to get everything ready."
"Of course." Lightning replied. "I'm sure this will be awesome." He said smiling to Sapphire.
"How about a cacke? A party is not a party with out it." Lightning suggested.
"Of course, that will be really good." He replied.
"I know that will happen." Darky replied as they aproached the docks.
"Yes, it will be fun." He said smiling
I rather having them subbed. Althoug the only ones I like dubbed are Dragonball and pokemon.
"Yeah, it sound fun!" He said happily.
