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Narrowleaf began to laugh. "Aww... Did I hurt the wittle princess's feewings?" He asked, mockingly.
Narrowleaf transformed into a pile of ink, so he could slip through. "Brisk?!" He called.
"It's a miracle! The brat shut up for a moment." Narrowleaf taunted.
"Wh-where are they!?" Narrowleaf asked, snapping awake.
"Brisk... I blanked out.. Wh-what happened?" Narrowleaf asked faintly.
Narrowleaf sighed. "Y-yeah... I've heard it happens a lot."
(Err... Nevermind. Sure.)
(What... I...)
My mother was a unicorn, and my father was a pegasus. I was taken from them, and they couldn't afford to buy me back. I only had one friend and...
Narrowleaf passed out once more, holding the box tight.
Narrowleaf nodded, then tried to run. His leg was still bent the wrong way, but he could move.
"Narrowleaf.. Where'd you come from?" He asked, still resisting.
When Narrowleaf was sent to Bolt, he crumpled over. "C-Can't... See.. Can't walk..." He groaned.
(Very better.) "I don't know how to deal with these ones..." He replied.
A whike after his fall, Narrowleaf awoke. "Brisk...?" He moaned, unable to see.
('Dat pink's a bit hard to read, Fyi.) "Please..." Narrowleaf moaned, dragging his hooves.
(I put the curve things (I don't remember what they're called.) There so people didn't put both.) 'Kay. Your in.
The ink around Narrowleaf completly disolved, revealing his pony body. "Brisk... I'm sorry..." He said, turning around so he would hit the ground...
"No. I... I'm..." Narrowleaf said through whimpers. "S-something's wrong! I'm starting to dissolve...!"
Narrowleaf held her closer and tighter. "Shh... It'll be okay..." He murmured.
