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"Bolt... Calm down." Narrowleaf said, slightly nervous. "You can't keep getting mad like this!"
"We talked. It's... complicated." Narrowleaf said, turning to face Flitter. "Er... It's nothing."
"Flitter... Hi." Narrowleaf said with a smile.
"I'm sorry for what happened!!" he said.
"Brisk!!" Narrowleaf yelled. "Oh! I was worried!"
After a brief conversation, Narrowleaf went to see if Brisk was okay.
"Ma?! I'm home!" Narrowleaf called once he walked into the house. "Hey... From now on, I'm working here. AND living here."
Narrowleaf yawned. "Damn... Haven't slept in days..."
*Hmm... Damn. Probably trying to throw me away. Then again... NO! I love Brisk too much!* Narrowleaf thought to himself as he trotted to get some...
"Hmm... Alright. Let's go." Narrowleaf said.
"I... She loves both of us... that's what she said" He said.
"Didn't say..." Narrowleaf replied.
"I tried getting an answer like that..." Narrowleaf said, blushing.
Okay. Go 'head. (Side note:)SOULEATERONADULTSWIMOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD.
"Oh. That explains it. Er... I think somepony else will be better suited for being Royal Captain, milord." Narrowleaf replied. "I want to work at...
"I... Th-thanks Bolt..." Narrowleaf said. "Hmm... Where did everypony come from?"
"Bolt... what h-happened?" Narrowleaf asked, still in pain.
"Ask... Brisk..." Narrowleaf moaned in pain.
"Brisk... I think I'm seeing things..." Narrowleaf said, not paying attention to what Bolt was saying. "Heh.. I would say to hurry up, but I..."
Narrowleaf winced in severe pain. "Brisk... L-Luna's gone... I got... her." He mumbled. "Brisk... Wh-when I asked you... who you love more......
