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"Huh..." Raven took a moment to look over the exterior before entering. "Not bad. Some darker colors, they could give this place a badass, gothy...
Raven sighed. "...how about a few rules?"
"So even if I don't understand, that big dick does. Even if he wants to pretend he's a jerk with a lifelong heart of gold."
Uhh, you're better at violent literature?
We've gotta tone down on the grimdark for a while after this.
"Worked something out. I think Asshat was one of them. Stories say they were just like that. Just... 24/7."
"Nopony?" She chuckled. "Girl. I know who would. Remember I told you about two monsters the old ponies used to take down Azrael? Remember I told...
Maya shrugged. "A lot more horny."
"I'm sure they're fine." Asmo followed. Raven shook her head. She had become too attached. It was too late to make her not love Nightshade....
"Well." Asmo sighed. "You. Critic guy. You're still a prick. Don't get it twisted." "I'm just too stubborn, I guess, Nighty. I wanna help you."
"Well. At least *squee!* over here came out alive." "Nighty." Raven stopped before the tree. "Come on, I can see you."
Asmo sighed and shook his head. "Can't stop her." It took no time for Raven to spot the park and beeline across the street. "Nighty!"
"Not much," Maya replied. "Just way pregnant."
"Hey." Asmo tried to stop her from leaving, blocking with his body. "Just stay with us. We'll tell Maya and Dusty." "No." Raven effortlessly...
Raven woke up, groggy, looking around the office before sitting up. "What... the hell happened? Where's Nighty?!"
"This!" He seemed to be speaking in numerous voices now as he pointed to the butchered critic. "This is what's wrong with me! Anypony who's dear...
Raven didn't respond. "Get the *squee!* AWAY FROM HER!" Asmo raised up a few tentacles between Nightshade and Raven.
Maya shrugged. "No more than normal, from what I've seen." "Uhh..." Asmo focused his eyes on Raven. "She saw this, was horrified, and passed out....
Maya spoke up from her seated position. "Hi, Eddy!" Raven fainted immediately. Asmo opened many eyes around the room before raising an eyebrow....
"Your saviors have ariiiiived, dick breath!" Asmo conjured a few tentacles, using them to tear the door open.
