999: Subcontinent Edittion

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  1. DesuPastaLuv

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    I walked to the park, it was in the middle of the night...It was quiet. And all of the sudden i felt a sharp pain in my neck...Like a...needle?


    I woke up in a small room, it felt like it was going down so i asumed it was an elevator, my vision was foggy and my head hurt alot, i couldn't remember anything...My eyes started to hurt and i opened my eyes slowly my back was against the wall and my legs were limp and my arms hanged the room had a silver wall with a velvet carpet on the far right of the room was the buttons: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 and the last one was a cyan skull i looked at the corner of the room and i saw a boy with brown ungroomed hair, he was hugging his legs rocking he looked up and i saw a mix of fear and surprise in his eyes "Thank god! I thought you were dead..." he mumbled the last part by his voice i asumed he was 16 a year older than me. I rubbed my head painfully and the boy helped me up "Are you ok...?" he asked and helped me sit up, i coughed and looked up at him a flinched back and yelped he quickly got away from me getting the message that i did not want to be touched "Wh-where are we? Who the h*ll are you!?" i said he looked at his feet and mumbled "My name is Chare." i looked at the ceiling then Chare "Icelyise...B-but you can call me Ice for short!" i shudderd and stood up placing my hand on the wall to help keep my balance then, i noticed something: I was wearing a collar--not a normal dog collar emo's wear, it was a metal thick collar with a bright yellow button in the front and i wasn't the only one who had one...Chare had one too but it was green and had the letter "P" in white text. The elevator finally stopped honestly the elevator was going so fast i felt like i was going to hurl when we came to a stop. A hatch opened on the ceiling Chare stood up "I could climb up there...But i dunno about you." He said and i raised an eyebrow "Are you calling me short!? I'm a growing girl of course im short!" i lashed at him and he chuckled "I could help you up." I flinched back "N-no way! Who knows you might be a weirdo or something!" he rolled his eyes and was about to climb up "Bye then~" I whimperd "W-wait! I take it back!" I said and he climbed down "I bet i can toss-" i stopped him at the word "Toss" "W-What!? N-no! You are not throwing me-" before i could even protest he held me in his arms and threw me actually. I landed on my bottom pretty hard, "Ouch..." i groaned and Chare landed on his feet next to me. The room had a grey metal flooring with grey metal walls with velvet rims. It looked like a warehouse, but with no boxes or shelves...There were nine other elevaters too, i saw some people some were puzzled...Some were infuriated...And some were scared to death, me and Chare ran to them i panted and Chare looked up at them "And just who the h*ll are you?" a girl wiith white hair and yellow eyes asked, behind her was a cowering little boy with white hair and yellow eyes as well. I asumed they were related, "Im...*Pant* *Pant* Chare...This is Icelyise." He pointed at me, "Do we really have time for introductions!?" The whitette protested a older women-probably in her late 30's flicked her hair over her shoulder "We've been in here for a half an hour, i think we have time to at least know our names." she reasoned with the girl and she pouted "I'm Micha."(My-Cha) the women said with her hand on her hip the little girl then spoke "Alisa...Alisa Umemori."(You-ma-mori) the whitette said there were a few other but they stayed silent "I-im...Ren..." the little boy silently said, Micha crossed her arms and i broke the silence "Why are we here?" i asked hopping for an anwser suddenly a hologram appeared on the wall everyone turned around and walked to the wall were the hologram was being projected "Well well well! Looks like we got all nine of you!" the hologram sounded as jolly as a kid in a candy store "Let me introduce myself...I am Zero! Your helpful assistant! Nya-Nya-Nya-Nya! Just kidding, but i WILL be anwsering your questions." "Why are we here?" i asked and the hologram bursted in a fit of laughter "Pfft! Ha! You really think i would tell you? You can go ahead and try to find out yourselves. Well if i have no more interruptions...This is the Nonary game! Subcontinent Edditton! Mwahaha!" the hologram faked a laugh by the looks of it it looked like a female, maybe 12 years old. She had messy hair that coverd her eyes and she wore a docters mask for some reason she cleared her throat and contiued "The collars you have on help you control your brain-waves and make select few objects move--Without touching them of course!" "I have a question." Chare said "What is it Charco?" "What does this P mean on my collar-" "It means your a pair. Pairs are..Well y'know, pairs! They share the same feeling, and the same fate. While solos on the other hand can do what they want without suffering the fate of they're teammate." and the hologram went on...

    What did i do wrong?
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    999: Subcontinet Edittion (Part 2)

    Icelyise's POV


    My heart pounded and i started to panic "Wh-what does fate mean!?" i asked and the girl was quite hesitant "Do you REALLY want to know...?" i nodded quickly and there was a momment of silence...
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    "Death" she said plainly all of us had shocked looks on our faces "In your collars are needles, one to inject your body with a poison that will make you go to sleep...The next will kill you while your sleeping sooo..." "Then how do we take these damn things off!?" an older man asked, he looked 20, he wore glasses and a brown jacket his hair was black, "Well the first way is to get out using that door over there...And the other way is to die." there was a painfull silence after she said that, death? Being trapped in here...None of this adds up, who were these people? Why did they take us? How long were we sleeping? Im sure it wasn't a year because my parents would have been looking for me by now...Maybe a month? or a week....Maybe it was a year but my parents just gave up looking, i was terrified. "Then how do we open the door?" Alisa asked "You have to get enough white blood cells to open the door, 100 blood cells to be exact." Alisa looked annoyed "Are you expecting us to kill each other!?" the hologram just sighed and looked at her feet "Would you shut up PLLEEAASSEE? Ahem now you have to figure out murder misteries and...Other things murder related...Slove enough murders get some white blood cells in your collar." everyone was silent and suddenly a metal door opened "Thats the door to your murder you gotta slove. The door will close in 3 minutes and you can only team up with 3 people. Since theres Nine of you that oughta be enough, riigght?" she joked i quickly grabbed Chares arm and he gave me a confused look "If we turned up together we're starting it and ending it together." i whisperd to him. And he nodded, Alisa took her little brother and Micha i took Chare and that older gentle men while the other three people went toghter we all enterd the room holding on to our teamates.
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    (A/N: Sorry this chapter is kinda sort, before we can get into the game i'll need to think up a murder to slove. Uggh im awful at puzzles ;-;)
     
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    999: Subcontinent Edittion (Part 3)

    Icelyise's POV


    Suddenly...As soon as we walked into the room...Police men were litterd all over the place, women, men, children all alike screams could be heard...Were we free? Suddenly, time itself stoped, only me chare and the older gentlemen were still moving, then that 'zero' character appeared. "Your probably thinking your free! Well, not now since i appeared, but annywaayy! This is an actual recreation of a murder mystery that happened in the past, slightly alterd, though. But even in a recreation you'll still be able to die, and you know what that Alisa girl said? About killing each other for blood cells? Well yeah, you can do that." I gasped and zero contiued "But when you take blood cells from other people...The collar injected a
    teeny-tiny adam in you while you were sleeping like babies in the elevator, but this adam alters your white blood cells so that some blood cells will flee from your body, so when you take blood cells from another person...It may raise your score by 40! But on the other hand...It might lower your score by 41."
    Everyones faces were frozen "The blood cells will flee your body when you leave this place so no worries! So while time is frozen you might see blue glowy dots on things and people, this means that object can be lifted with your mind, but if things are green that means it can be turned off or off using your mind, things that are red are things you can make dissapear, but THOSE are prreetty rare to comeby, so when you see red; your close to finding the body of your victim! And thats pretty much it, any questions?"
    "N-no..." I mumbled
    "That was detailed..." Chare mumbled.
    "Okay! Have fun everyoonnee!!!" Zero said and zero was gone and time reverted back to normal. "First order of business, lets see if we can find out what our mystery is--" "Who made you leader, kid?"
    "I...i rather gather information before charging headfirst into this case..." I mumbled.


    (A/N: If you've read Sweet Candy Girl you'll know why this is so short. I gotta keep updating!*Drinks coffee* Bena out~)
     

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