Betrayal

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  1. Equestria

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    Each betrayal begins with trust.
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    Chapter1
    Princess Celestia was pacing the floor. It was late at night,and Princess Luna hasn't returned yet.
    "Where is she?"The Alicorn said,staring at the wooden door.
    "Princess,she we look for her?"A pegasus gaurd asked.
    "Yes,but hurry-"Princess Celestia began,but a note came through the door.The princess walked twards it and made it levitate.It read:
    Dear Princess Celestia,
    Your seceret admirer wishes to see you on the outskirts of Ponyville,11:30 sharp
    Sighned,(The name got smudged)
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    "Luna!"Princess Celestia dropped the note and ran to her younger sister."Where were you?"
    "Nowhere."The small princess said sleepily.She began to walk away."We are going to bed!"
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    "What's this?"Princess Luna had awoken at 6:00 in the morning.She used magic to levitate the note.
    The princess laughed devilishly,"We'll just watch who sent the princess this note."She placed the note back on the floor and left for breakfast.
    "Luna!"Princess Celestia yelled.
    "Yes!"The younger princess ran.
    "I'm going to do...princess things outside of Canterlot.Gaurds!"Princess Celestia was combing her long,multi-colored hair,"Gaurds,will you make sure the princess doesn't leave the castle?"
    "Yes, mam!"The Unicorn and Pegasus said,standing close to princess Luna.
    "I'm off!"Princess Celestia said,with a clicking of the tall door. Princess Luna ran to the window and saw her sister fly off out of sight.
    The young Alicorn snickered,whispering into the gaurds gray ears,"I need to attend a princess meeting,ALONE."
    Princess Luna stepped outside the castle and began to flap her wings."We hope if thy catches us,thy doesn't send us to the moon."She thought,see Princess Celestia land near Ponyville.
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    Princess Celestia began to walk past a tree,looking for the pony who sent it.
    The princess gasped,Discord was holding flowers with a grin on his face.
    The princess looked at him and practically slapped the flowers from his lion like arm. He scurred to catch them,but the princess walked away,not even daring to spit in his direction.
    She flipped her hair and walked past the tree again,flying off.
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    Princess Luna landed behind a willow tree. Princess Celestia had landed already,and began serching for the pony who sent the note.
    Princess Celestia stood in the way of the pony who sent the letter.
    "Moove."The small Alicorn said,moving from the left side of the tree to the right.
    All she saw was her older sister slap flowers from the pony's hand,then walking away.
    She walked past the tree,and Princess Luna held her breath.Once she saw Princess Celestia take off,she breathed out.
    "Who sent thy note?"She whispered,looking past the tree.She turned around and covered her mouth from the gasp.She saw Discord,crying,holding flowers in his hands.She stopped hiding and walked towards him with a smile
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    (Author's note:Some of this I got from '...So I Became One',It's if Luna spied on it)
     
  2. DanSze

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    I'm approving this, but I really have to say you need to work on formatting. If this was any longer, I couldn't have read it.
     
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    hahahah! funny story!
     

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