Cuhrayzee, the Unstable Stallion

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  1. Frank West

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    ( I wanted a character who just screamed “CRAZY”, so I took inspiration from Krieg from Borderlands. In order to make him more original and to make him fit more in an MLP setting, I removed Krieg's "KILL KILL KILL" mentality, and made him less random. The background story was made from scratch, as well as the attire. The personality had a TON of tweaks to further seperate him from Krieg, but the overall inspiration is still there. I decided to lay out the stats based on his character. I also have subplots planned for him.)


    Name: CUHRAYZEE
    Gender:Male
    Age Group: Young Stallion
    Race: Earth Pony
    Class:Berserker

    Health:100
    Stamina:100

    Resilience:2, not the strongest, but makes up for it in speed and attack patterns
    Ferocity:8, he is absolutely crazy
    Speed:5, he is very hyper and has a lot of energy
    Awareness:2, he is somewhat schizophrenic
    Creativity:6, his craziness lets his imagination run wild, broken wire cutie mark adds 1 point
    Willpower:2, has a tendency to not think before acting

    Skills:Crazed Charge, Fury, Ferocious yell

    Achievements: Deadly
    Inventory/Equipment:
    ILOOKGOOD: Cuhrayzee's signature top-hat, he got it almost immediately after breaking out of the asylum, he keeps the smaller items of his inventory in it.


    Cuhrayzee wasn’t always an insane pony, he used to be a regular pony named Zee who merely worked at the Manehattan mental asylum. He worked as an assistant for the doctors, until one day, one of the more dangerous patients jumped onto the medicine cart, started mixing random potions, and then poured it all onto Zee’s face. Zee was immediately put into a emergency lockdown, but the doctor’s left the door open. Zee, now lacking fear, ran out into the hall. He escaped the mental asylum to go live his new life . Cuhrayzee’s has a very weird personality. He talks in a sing-song voice a lot, and tends to see things that aren’t there. He is easily angered, but never loses the happy tone of his voice. Usually, he never thinks before acting. He is usually nicer to mares and foals than he is to grown male ponies, even going as far as to stop fighting mid-battle because he sees the stallion is friend’s with a mare or child. This is more or less an instinct of the female/child not being a threat to him, this 'instinct' leads him to be easily defeated by hostile mares .
    He is not a 'kill anything you see' character. He's actually chaotic neutral most of the time. And the social aspect of RPing, when socializing with this character, sometimes, we'll all be laughing our butts off as the characters try to decipher what he is saying, due to the fact that he speaks in sentence fragments, but other times, it's rather obvious. He DOES show emotion in his own special psychotic, completely random way. I'm not saying he'll always act this insane, but here's an example.
    Some pony in extremely sad,and in order to cheer them up, he purrs up against them like a cat. Other times, when he is FURIOUS at a pony who is on his side, instead of starting a mutiny or yelling at them, he might just walk up to them, slap them, scoff, and then walk away after saying what he was mad about.
    As for the fighting aspect of the RP, Cuhrayzee does have a tendency to pick fights. But he has a certain goal in mind when he does, these goals range from something as pointless as who gets the first cup of cider, to something as important as saving somepony's life. In combat, a lot of Cuhrayzee's attack decisions are completely random, and he is completely unpredictable.
    (I've taken extra precautions to make sure he doesn't always start fights, in a more social setting RP, he will be that weird pony who makes everything awkward.)


    His cutie mark is a broken wire . alluding to his overall craziness

    (The attire is designed to match his personality, it's intentionally strange.)
    He wears a plaid tuxedo torn at the front sleeves .He wears a white full head mask, steam punk goggles, and a top hat to hide his identity, wanting nothing to do with his past life.

    He lives in a cave outside of Baltimare, so that the Manehattan Mental Asylum won't find him.
     
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    Looks good, just one thing: Your cutie mark and special talent! It gives you a small bonus to something.

    If you need help with it, just ask, I can explain. :3
     
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    Please do.
     
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    All right, well, for example, take a pony whose special talent is martial arts.

    You might make his cutie mark ability +1 to all melee combat rolls, or you might make it +3 to all unarmed melee combat rolls, or +5 to a specific unarmed melee combat skill's roll.
     
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    So shouldn't Silver's mark be a watchful eye then? He does seem to hang around Feffur, keeping an eye on her! For no reason at all! Tooootally no reason!
     
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    No, silly, because his talent is protecting, not watching. :p
     
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    Not doing much protecting lol! Feffur's killed 11 innocent NPC's! One because he didn't love her! XD
     
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    Well, I bet that's at least a 50% save rate right there. Cause he's stopped her from killing tons more. :p
     
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    Uhmm..... lemme think... Nope! Actually, he is the cause of 3 of the deaths lol! He made Feffur grumpy!!
     

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