Haikus are boring, they are not even witty, when they end with that. Besides, they can be; you have a stroke of genius, and it's a good one.
I guess this is what We all would call -sunglasses- Organized chaos YEAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH RP in Haiku? You are very much insane. I want to try it.
I can kinda understand the teachers point, it was for an actually assignment, but this was primary school and even then I was smart enough to know that what ever marks i got then wouldn't ever matter.