Gimme critic to my wub wub

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  1. Das Hie

    Das Hie An Everypony Regular

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    I made this little glitchy dubstep song thingy, and I think it sound okay, but tell me what you think.
    I am new to making this kind of music, so do not expect too much.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7r8BucScuWo

    Thanks!
     
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    00:00 - 00:07 - Good opening.
    00:08 - 00:24 - Annoying random noises.
    00:25 - 01:08 - Decent music, with occasional annoying random noises.
    01:09 - 01:33 - A nice mix of traditional music and electronic beats.
    01:34 - 01:41 - More annoying random noises... is that singing? I can't tell.
    01:42 - 02:14 - Pretty standard stuff. Good, but predictable.
    02:15 - 02:47 - Seriously, is that a Breezy, or what? I can't understand any of it.
    02:48 - 02:53 - This part sounds quite good.
    02:54 - 03:06 - Again, the music sounds good, but that voice...
    03:07 - 03:22 - Still good, still predictable.
    03:23 - 03:30 - Okay, this sounds nice...
    03:31 - 03:39 - ...But then there's that weird distorted voice again.
    03:40 - 03:58 - Wait, what? What's this supposed to be?

    Overall, I'd give it a 7/10.
    It has potential, but it needs a lot of improvement.
     
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    Thanks, that's the critic I was hoping for :)
     

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