I have an idea for a sad prequel fic, but I need a way to put it in text.

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  1. FirelanderX

    FirelanderX A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Exposition:
    Who? Princess Celestia, OC filly (yellow coat to symbolize sunrise)
    When? 500 years after Princess Luna's banishment
    Where? A tavern in Canterlot

    Complications:
    The filly is struck with a disease that can not be cured by modern medicine or magic. The disease slowly takes away her senses in this order: speech, sight, and finally hearing. Celestia spends time with the filly and tells various stories to her before her time comes.

    Turning Point/Climax:
    The filly gives one last smile and reaches out to hug Celestia. As Celestia embraces the filly, she can feel her grasp weakening before finally becoming motionless. A tear falls from Celestia's face directly on the filly's chest.

    Falling action:
    Celestia ponders to herself on how should could have been there for her, and how she could have been a better friend.

    Resolution:
    Princess Celestia looks for a student in her academy that can help teach her the fundamentals and purpose of friendship.

    This is my road map for a fiction that has circulating in my mind these past few days. I was wondering on how I could start this fiction, and where I could go with it. Any help would be appreciated.
     
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    Radaboy Everypony's Resident Black Guy

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    That sounds a very good idea, and by the way you composed the road map, you seem like a talented writer. I'm not really sure what you mean by that last statement, as whenever I have an idea, I just write, but this seems like it would be a promising fic, on the same level of My Little Dashie.
     

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