Just another party...wait what?!

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    FANFICTION TITLE: JUST ANOTHER PARTY...WAIT WHAT?!
    FEATURING: Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Applebloom and other characters.
    DISCLAIMER: No, I do not own My Little Pony. Hub does. Please keep that in mine. Thanks.
    WRITTEN BY: smartponyiq(Me)
    CHAPTER ONE
    It was an ordinary day in Ponyville, the sun was shining in the beautiful sky. The temperature was perfect; the kind where you the sun doesn't shine so hot on your skin. Applejack, a pony from the Apple Family, was on her usual days work. Harvesting, cropping and bucking apples with her brother, Big Macintosh.
    "Boy, is this a lovely weather! Rainbow Dash and the other pegasi must've done a pretty great job, , dontcha think, Big Mac?" Applejack said to her brother while working.
    "Eeyup." Came back a usual reply from the big, red stallion.
    "Alright," Applejack wiped a huge amount of sweat from her forehead as she harvested the last few apples from the tree. "I'm wiped out. Have you seen Applebloom?"
    "I heard she was at Pinkie Pie's place." replied Big Macintosh. Applejack tilted her head in surprise. "Applebloom? At Pinkie Pies' place? Wow, that's somethin' new to hear!"
    Applejack trotted away to Pinkie Pie's place, carrying an apple or two in progress to treat her little sister. And another one for Pinkie Pie as well.

    Applejack knocked on Pinkie Pie's outside door, which is a struggle as her hooves are clobbered up with two big, delicious apples new from harvesting. "Howdy, Pinkie! It's Applejack. Open up! I've brought something for ya!" No reply. Applejack waited, and still nothing. "Pinkie Pie? Applebloom? Y'all in there! Anypony in there at all?" Nothing. That's strange, thought Applejack. Oh well, it's not like me to be slacking the afternoon off. I wonder how's Fluttershy doing.

    Meanwhile, in Pinkie Pie's house, lay a pony and a filly-Pinkie Pie and Applebloom. "I don't know," said Pinkie Pie queasily. "I don't know why I didn't open the door for Applejack. It's just too hard."
    Applebloom gave her a tiny pat on Pinkie's back, due to being small and filly-ish. "Don't worry. I'm sure it's not like you to be depressed just because of one, silly party that's gone bad! Applejack keeps goin' on about your parties and how you love to throw them!" she told Pinkie Pie. Pinkie Pie gave a slight smile, and nodded. She thought for a while. "Maybe I should be doing something to cheer myself up. Another party!" squealed Pinkie. After a few seconds of getting excited, her shoulders drooped on another side thought. "What about this time the party gets ruined again?" she said. "Everypony will be SO disappointed!"
    It's every filly for herself, as young as she is, Applebloom gave Pinkie Pie a pat and said quietly, "Ya know, I should be going back to the farm. Goodbye!" and left Pinkie Pie alone in the kitchen, thinking.


    "I don't know what's going around that pony's brain," admitted Applejack as she met up with Fluttershy and Angel. "I knocked on the door, called out for names, and nothing happens!"
    "Ooh...maybe Pinkie Pie wasn't in her house. Maybe she was at Mrs. Cakes." said Fluttershy sweetly in her normal, soft, sweet voice.
    "I don't know." said Applejack uncomfortably. "And I'm gettin' worried about Applebloom. Look, Fluttershy, I had a nice time talkin to ya, sugar cube, but I gotta go back to the farm and orchards to see if Applebloom is there. Sometimes I get worried about what that filly is up to!"
    "No problem, Applejack. I will see you around." fluttered Fluttershy.

    Back at the Sweet Apple Acres, Applejack felt relieved to found Applebloom there. "So, little' sis. You were at Pinkie Pie's weren't ya?" demanded Applejack. Applebloom shuffled around nervously from hoof to hoof. She finally bit her lip and hesitantly nodded.
    "Yer not hiding anything from me, Applebloom. Spit...it...OUT!" Applejack said. Applebloom cleared her throat uneasily and said, "Yes, I...I was at Pinkie Pie's and..."
    "And what?"
    "And, I was, er, baking cupcakes with her!"
    "No, you didn't, Applebloom. Quit messin' around or I'll get Big Mac! And I mean it!" Applejack ordered.
    Applebloom finally gave in. "Alright, fine...I...uh...You know, Pinkie Pie? Well, she, uh. Is not feeling quite well, because...uh...remember the last party she threw? Well, she doesn't feel okay, you know...and..." Applebloom trailed off, eyes wandering the ground as she said it.
    Applejack could hear no more as what it was is too clear. "Really? She's feelin' depressed? Awww, sugar cube. Thanks for tellin' me. Now all I need to do is cheer that pony up!" she said proudly.
    "You mean we will cheer Pinkie up!" a voice jolted behind Applejack and Applebloom. They both jumped and spun around to see who it was. "Rainbow Dash! Twilight Sparkles! Fluttershy! Wow! How do you know that-" Applejack started but soon was cut off by the determined voice of Rainbow Dash.
    "There is no time whatsoever! Pinkie's been depressed lately, and you know Pinkie! She's never really that depressed in her life! She's always happy and cheerful. So, we're going to give her a party that she will never forget!" Rainbow Dash declared with pride while Twilight Sparkles and Fluttershy cheered behind her. "She's right!" said Twilight Sparkles. "Pinkie is definitely not herself lately. So we're going to throw a party."
    Applejack felt reassured. "Hm...good plan! Well, everypony! What y'all waitin' for?! Let's get this show on the road! Yee-haw!"

    Authors Note:
    Hi everyone. I just wanted to thank you for reading my this Fanfiction and I hope you enjoyed it. I am always looking for critics, complaints (not really) and compliments. There will be another a Chapter 2 very, very soon! Trust me!
    Signing out!
    smartponyiq
     

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