Little note: The Machine can swap the lives of the dead. Depending on who, you might not end up dead as a result.
Was this too much? I just reeeeaaallllly wanted Ria to go crazy. I believe her as the least stable of my ocs.
No, if that's the character, then that's the character. Although, I can imagine that your struggling against the swaring rule and so comming off as a little anti-climactic. If that's the case, how about stopping the line of dialogue just before she would naturally start turning the air blue, then going on to safely describe how Ria goes about spewing obcenities, but not describe the words themselves. That make sense?
Really hoping I haven't taken this too far. This is pretty much Cyanside/Shadow's last resort. If I've got too far with my post I'll edit it, but if Shadow gets stopped here she's stopping for good, so I hope it's okay. P.S. Blaze gear is pretty much a 'final form' of sorts. Shadow sets herself on fire, and almost becomes one with the flames, allowing herself to control their effect on the air around her. This allows her to move at incredibly fast speeds, and bolsters the amount of control she has over the flames, along with their power. However, if she stays in Blaze gear for a minute, her coat begins to quickly burn away, any longer and she will burn to death.
...Now I'm waiting for the attack to fail so I can be all "Welp, there goes our last chance of survival"
But no cigar. Interesting idea with the tooth falling out. I kinda like it. Now, we've got to think of a good swap for Cyanside now...Hmmm...For some odd reason, I feel like Rarity.
I feel like she didn't react hard enough to losing a tooth. Ever prematurely lose a tooth before? That crap hurts! EDIT: Okay, okay; she didn't feel excruciating pain because the book had wiped away a bit of her gums, so it just sorta fell out naturally. EXCUSE FOUND!!!
