ok, there is a few problems with this. Isn't he a little to young to be vice-minister of anything? And even though I have no problem with this, the runic alphabet have no sign for question mark (at least elder futhark didn't and that was the runic alphabet I assumed you used), and while we are on the subject on runes, the fact that you can use different kinds of magic with the help of runes seems a little bit overpowerd. His occupation is also confusing.
If it's not too late... Name: Maximillian Hoofworth IIXV Nickname: Max, Sweeps Gender: Stallion Age: 16 Race: Unicorn Appearance: Shadow grey coat with a soot black, messy mane, with an equally messy tail, once more soot colored, but with a white, slightly big spot of fluff on his chest. Incredibly dirty, to the point where no amount of showers or baths could save him, but oddly enough not smelly or so, but it generates a cloud of soot and dust wherever he goes. As far as clothing goes, he wears an all too large top hat for him, which has becoming ragged and slightly decayed, with a crimson red scarf around his neck wherever he goes. Cutie Mark: A puff of smoke (Almost impossible to see through all the soot on him.) Special Talent : Smoke magic, along with a body made of it. Other Talents: Can wield a chimney-broom with not-so-deadly skill, along with basic unicorn talents. Incredibly lightly for his size, both a talent and a curse. Occupation: Chimney-sweeper! And a rebel against most authorities. Personality: Heavy Yorkshire accent, to the point where even other with the same accent have a hard time understanding him, has seen many messed up things in his currently short life, so he tries to act very adult. Feisty, loud, sometimes rude, but he doesn't have a hard time understanding the situation or what he's seeing in front of him. History: A pony who was supposed to live up in glamour among the ponies of Canterlot, but his family went bankrupt through his young age and had to decline, not long after his parents disappeared inexplicably and he was left to an orphanage. There he grew up with the other kids and managed to stay friendly with most of them, still not without a few brawls here and there. He obtained a job as a chimney sweeper and after an accident, discovered that he was practically made of the stuff and was, in a way, almost invincible. While he was out on his job, the orphanage went bankrupt as well and was sold off, the kids there transferring to another. Max was saddened to see this and thus, figured that to pay a homage to the place he grew up in, he'd keep on doing his job, taking care of Canterlots and Ponyvilles chimneys. (optional): Will probably develop his powers throughout the rp.
