My first original song

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  1. Revilo

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    Hey ponies of EP.com I have recently just finished my first original song titled Pimptastic Rhymes (my dad gave me that name lol) anyways, I would like it if you all could tell me what you think of it or something like that. But anyways here it is https://www.dropbox.com/s/771ossbafvo4uge/Pimptastic Rhymes.mp3
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    Like I said in our Skype chat, it's pretty good for your first original song. The only thing I don't like is some of the snare and clap sounds, but its pretty catchy. Can't wait to hear more of your work.
     
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    Not bad for a first song.
    For a new person new to music production, I suggest getting to know you music program, which means simply messing around with and looking up tutorials.
    I would also suggest looking up some chord theory and chord progressions.
    If you got any questions, just ask.
     
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    Thank you for your guys feedback, very much appreciated :)
     
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    Me being a music enthusiast and occasionally an editor, that was pretty freakin' awesome. Especially since it's your first song!
     
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    It's very good for a first song, I really like the melody and the chord progression. The only thing I hate is the drum pack, though. FL's default drum samples make me cringe hard ::S: You should definitely get some more drum samples!
    If you need help with anything, you could always PM me or Nerdus :smile: I'd be glad to help a fellow composer!
     
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    Since i dont have a computer that can render FL Studio i have to use it on my iPad and if you want new instrument packs you have to buy them and i don't have the money for it right now so until i get some money im stuck using the default instruments. Luckily i was able to buy the Varazdin Orchastral set
     
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    Ah, I see. That sounds pretty limited indeed. :c
     

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