Pony Poetry - Luna Poem

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  1. ThePoeticPony

    ThePoeticPony Forgetful Pro

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    Greetings! It'd be a bit weird if I had the name "ThePoeticPony" for no apparent reason so I've decided to post some of my pony poetry on here. This forum seems the best place to do it because, obviously, it is based upon Literature. One of my higher acclaimed poems, this particular one dedicated to Luna is also one of my own personal favourites. I shall be doing a series of poems (whether I will post them all on here is yet to be thought about), but you are free to make suggestions to which pony I should write a poem about next from Applejack to Zecora, anypony. Enjoy!

    Isolated: A Luna Poem

    Betrayed, forgotten, abandoned, lost,
    Trapped forever in the cold, cold frost.
    No friends to mention, no fun to be had,
    Trapped forever, feeling guilty and sad.
    She looks up to the stars and dreams of any hope,
    Trapped forever with no way to cope.
    Building anger, emotion and rage,
    Trapped forever, an animal in a cage.
    Her time is coming and she wants her payback,
    Trapped no longer so it’s time to attack.
    Until Twilight and co unleash the spark,
    Free forever from the world of the dark.
    If only, if only Luna understood,
    Celestia had to do it for the greater good.
     
  2. Jetstream

    Jetstream A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    I loved how you completely captured the essence of Luna's character.

    You can always be forgiven by someone whom you have wronged - But sometimes the consequences of said actions cannot be reversed or removed.

    Measure the Risk.
     
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    AbstinenceofIntelligence Practically Part of the Site Itself

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    *Standing ovation*

    Thats was fantastic. This is one of the things I really love about this community.
     
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    So. Much. Love.
    I Love it man!!
    Keep up the awesome poetic poetry :smile:
     

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