Pony poetry on the spot

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  1. Prince Darkmoon

    Prince Darkmoon Philosopher and Pony Lover

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    Ok, I am officially bored, so I decided to write a quick poem about a pony(or two) very dear to me:grin:.

    A warm welcome
    As I settled in Ponyville, a voice from nowhere gave me a chill.
    When I started to turn around, I saw a pink pony was abound.
    She greeted me with a smile, and threw a party so divine.
    Out in the fields so green, it almost seemed to me she could see through a screen.
    I learned Pinkie Pie was her name, so fitting for her curly mane.
    Suddenly she began to shake, earflop kneetwitch and eyeflutter, I was afraid she was gonna break.
    Then she said so sly, that a beautiful rainbow would grace the sky.

    Soon I heard a mighty roar, winds like generated from the wings of war.
    A cyan beauty arrived at the scene, she seemed to me like a dream.
    With a multicoloured mane, she approach me and Pinkie with a flame.
    I have never seen you so alive, Pinkie said with a smile, I predicted you would arrive.
    I flew for many mile, the rainbow said returning the smile, so that I may come to your party tonight.
    But who is this colt? She asked her friend, I like his style to no end.

    She turned to me with eyes of fire, introducing herself as Rainbow Dash, who I now seemed to admire.
    We went flying in the clouds, high above the party crowds.
    We raced and she won all the time, not that I seemed to mind, for to everything but her I was now blind.
    I was invited to her home, to spend some time together alone.
    We fell asleep as one, me smelling her mane and she smelled mine, this night was rather fun.
    The first thing I saw then I woke up was those purple eyes, beautiful like the skies, it was then I did find, the warmest welcome of mine.




    If anyone else wants to write something quick about a pony (or more) they care about, you are free to do so, I am curious to see what you all can come up with on a short notice.
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    #1 Prince Darkmoon, Jul 23, 2012
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  2. Dilly Star

    Dilly Star The Dilliest in the Galaxy
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    While I feel that this should be moved to the Literature section, I will certainly contribute. I may re-post what I write to my own poetry thread, if I think it's long enough or good enough. I decided to write one from the point of view of Twilight Sparkle (which I've done once before). It's a parody of an older song (The Night Chicago Died), so it's just for fun. I don't know if parodies count, so I might just come back and write something original some other time, but I felt like making this. Thanks for inspiring me to write this, Prince Darkmoon.

    Title: The Day Canterlot Died

    Lyrics:

    Mommy was a mare
    On the west side of Canterlot
    Back in Equestria
    Back when I was young

    On my brother's wedding day
    In the land of the two-bit coin
    When Canterlot city died
    And the tale keeps going on

    When a mare named Chrysalis
    Made arrangements go amiss
    Had her changelings in the town
    When the walls were breaking down

    I heard my brother cry
    The princess fell the day Canterlot died
    Pinkie, what a night it really was
    Dashie, what a fight it really was
    No Harmony

    I heard my brother cry
    The princess fell the day Canterlot died
    Pinkie, what a night the ponies saw
    Dashie, what a fight the ponies saw
    Without Harmony

    All my friends got up and ran
    For out last hope, it seemed
    But we ran into a band
    Of the changelings of the queen

    We were fighting our mirrored selves
    For the Elements on the shelves
    But there were too many to beat
    And they brought on our defeat

    I heard my brother cry
    The princess fell the day Canterlot died
    Pinkie, what a night it really was
    Dashie, what a fight it really was
    No Harmony

    I heard my brother cry
    The princess fell the day Canterlot died
    Pinkie, what a night the ponies saw
    Dashie, what a fight the ponies saw
    Without Harmony

    And we thought that all was lost
    So we wondered at the cost

    The the magic swept us all
    And we saw them standing tall
    My brother and his bride
    The queen swept away by the tide

    The day Canterlot died
    The day Canterlot died
    Pinkie, what a night the ponies saw
    Dashie, what a fight the ponies saw
    True Harmony

    The day Canterlot died
    The day Canterlot died
    Pinkie, what a night it really was
    Dashie, what a fight it really was
    Love Harmony
     
    #2 Dilly Star, Jul 23, 2012
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