"Quite a Sight" poetry bundle

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    :derpe:Hello! I really like your writing style, as I find it to be similar to my own in some ways.

    The two poems I enjoyed most where:

    'Sunshine Reverie' and 'Soul Tides'

    The word choice and rhythm were married beautifully, and painted beautiful pictures in my mind.

    I look forward to reading more of your work! :grin:
     
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    Yay, thanks! :D I'm very happy my words managed to paint these mental images, because that's what I'm aiming for.
    And you are right, our styles are a bit similar. So here comes one deep poetic brohoof. /)
     
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    (\ Here is the return deep poetic brohoof.

    Have you had any lessons in creative writing/ poetry? Although some aspects of our writing styles are similar, your writing is quite refined and polished in my opinion. Just curious. :zebra:
     
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    Dood! Your imagery is fantastic, and your metre works out wonderfully! I really liked these.
     
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    What a wonderful compliment. ;_; No, I haven't had any lessons in writing. But when in the process of writing a poem, I am constanly re-reading everything to make sure it sounds nice as a whole (and I'm glad it does!). It's kind of like polishing a diamond... And I suppose that's why I prefer to write short poems; to keep the overview. (the Ni in my INFP, if you're familiar with cognitive functions)

    Thanks Dilly <3 Again, I'm very happy my imagery works well on other people.
     
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    I like them Twinkle! Great job, you get some cookies~
     
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