How would you rate my friend's stories and writing? What does he do well, and what could he improve on? Here's one of his earliest stories: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2846222/1/Romantic-Disaster And here's one of his most recent: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3154754/1/Steven-Kandy-s-Wedding Would you at least say he's improved?
