[Reds vs Blues] Downfall Pardoy series:

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  1. Crimson Lionheart

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    The Plot so far is this.

    The first episode starts off in Everypony's "Free Zone", where two unknown members are talking about Crimson and Robin in the Reds. Shortly after, Robin asks Crimson if Saul is going to go ahead with the invasion on the Blue's (Which is almost a suicide attack). Crimson tells that the only reason that Saul and Crimson isnt leading the assault themselves is because both of them know they'll fail.

    Robin then proudly proclaims "that honor goes to him". Crimson is surprised about this, saying that leading the assault is a very big deal. Crimson then goes to explain that he believes that the Reds, since the start of the war, have lost their way and are being misguided for the wrong cause, stating that he only wants "Order to Return." Robin then tells Crimson "We'll See"

    One of the Reds then walks into the door and introduces Adolf Laski, where he meets with every Red in the room before coming to Crimson. Crimson then tells Saul that not only is the attack itself a suicide mission, but the Blues already know of the attack. Crimson tries to stress his point, but Saul stands his ground, telling Crimson that "It's risky, but victory will result in control of Everypony". Crimson, still doubting success is told by Saul that "We will win this" before dismissing Crimson.

    After that, Crimson and Robin are inside a parking lot two hours later talking about the chances of success. Crimson states his mind again, while Robin also has his doubts. A messenger soon tells Crimson that Saul wishes to speak to him in private, where Crimson is soon taken in a car to Red Base.

    Meanwhile, Saul speaks about Everypony under Red control if they won the war, even telling in the meeting that Crimson has only been told the 'basic' details instead of the full story, because Saul hasn't told Crimson that the Blues are also planning an invasion on them yet, hence the private meeting while going through other details about the 'Utopian' state of the site after the war.


    That is it so far, much more characters are going to be introduced as well as the attack soon taking place.
     
  2. SaulLaski

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    Why ''Utopian state of the site'', Crim?
    Is the choice of words based on Unity's first chapter?
     
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    Nope. Just thought it would seem fitting, no reference intended.
     
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    I saw what you did there, Crim...
    Adolf Laski/Saul Hitler is on The Watch.
     
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    Change of plans

    Due to the low amount of people to fill the characters needed, i'll just be selecting names at random. I felt that it was rude to simply select names without asking for permission, but i might as well skip that phrase and just add names. If your name is mentioned from now on, then your in an episode.

    That is all. Feel free to speak your mind about this change
     
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    As long as it doesn't get cutted from YT by Hasbro, i don't have any negative coments.

    -EDIT-

    You should make a pun with ''Blue'' and ''Blew''.
    Or ''Red'' and ''Read''.
    Simply because i think it's going to be the phrases that precedes akward silences.
     
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    [​IMG]

    The first episode is finished and will be uploaded tomorrow.
     
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    I'm intrigued to see this.
    Anyways, seeing the bunkerland series, i'm sure this will be good. I can't wait to see this.
     
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    Episode 1: Pilot

    After Windows Live Movie Maker decided to be absolutely horid and ruin my first five seconds, i've decided to let that mistake slide. The remainder of the episode should be good. Please forgive my mediocre editing skills.

    'With the Red's preparing for an attack on the Blues, Crimson is losing faith for Red survival after discovering the Blues know of the attack. What will happen next ?

    Here you go.

    [video=vimeo;73204853]http://vimeo.com/73204853[/video]
     
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    Yup.
    My dear Crimson, Utopia wasn't a reference. I saw what you did there.
    That was awesome. I hope we loose this war though, i don't want this ''show'' to become a ''prophecy''.
    Will you upload new episodes every week?
    (remembers me we should talk about the horsemen's names once and for all. If you see the others, tell them to meet in the chat in exactly 12 hours and twenty minutes, it'll be around 10PM for me.)
     
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    Spoilers: Yes, we lose. I'll try and get new episodes uploaded as soon as they are finished.
     
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    Really good so far. I think I've landed a good role in it. Also cant wait for the next one, the introduction of sir ridley churchill and his allies.
     
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    My only complaint is that the text has a habit of blending in with all the white. Other than that, pretty wizard. I look forward to see what comes next.
     
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    For the text, you could use one that black and white-filled, just like funimation's videos on YouTube?
     
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    The text during some of the scenes, especially the Model scene was very transparent and blended to the point where it was extremely difficult to find, yet alone, read the text. I'll try and improve that for Episode 2.

    Stupid Windows Live Movie Maker....
     
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    I like it so far.
    When's the next one going to be up?
     
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    Crim, have i ever said that i loved you?
    In a bro/manly way, as friends, but yet i love you.
    Will you share S.P.I.K.E. waifu's-ness with me?

    I've made a picture for the occasion, but my program crashed and i can't seem to fix the said-pic anymore. Anyways, i'll send it to you via PMs. it's just for the joke really.
     
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    The next one should be up same time next week, maybe a day later due to Windows Live Movie. I'm getting the updated version tonight. I'm currently 3:30 minutes into of what should be a 10 minute episode. This one could feature you, but I'm also using your character for plot purposes as well.

    Yes. Yes i will.
     
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    I WANTR YOU IN MY *red team*.
    JOIN NOW, UNCLE SAUL HAS SPOKEN! (Okay, this argument has no weight, i'm not american.)
     

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