The Killer Pony ( My OC)

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    Twilight has just became an Alicorn, every-pony is excited and happy, except for a pony, a pony that nearly everypony has forgot about. But anyway, that part comes later, what really is important right now is the Flashback to a VERY long time ago, a few years after Luna was born, | ENTERING FLASHBACK .3.| A dark Pony was born, she was a dark purple, her mane a dark blue, she stared up at a Pony, a bright white one, it was Tia ( Celestia) But she never knew, Tia looked down and giggled a bit, then walked of, Luna on the other
    hoof, was more interested in the new Pony, she sniffed her, nuzzled her a bit, and looked at her tiny wings, and her bright purple eyes, Luna looked more surprised that confused, The name of this New filly was Umbra ( Dark in Latin) | Skip ahead 10 years, not very long for a princess XD| Not long ago, Umbra killed Somepony, byaccident| SKIP TO TWILICORN PART|" Okay, Twilight, i need to show you something..." Celestia said" Sure" Twilight repliedThey walked into Celestia's throne room, then pulled a switch, a entrance appeared from the wall, and it led down into a dark dungeon." So what do you need to show me?" Twilight askedCelestia didn't reply, but just carried on walking." Princess?" Twilight questioned" What is it?" Celestia finally replied" Well, what do you need to show me?" Twilight asked yet again" A Pony, a Pony who is far too dangerous to be anywhere else but here..." Celestia said worryingly." A Pony? Too Dangerous?" Twilight Muttered to her self.They then finally reached a prison cell, the iron bars have been scratched and even bitten on, one of the bars have even cracked a bit.Twilight stared at the prison cell, it was very dark, and could not see anything, then suddenly, a bright oval shape appeared so suddenly, it was an eye, a Purple one, the pupil shrunk, then, some sharp teeth appeared, the creature then grinned, then slowly a figure appeared, the creature was walking towards the front of the cage/cell, and was soon fully visible.Twilight stared with shock" This is Umbra, she is my Relative" Celestia sighed.Twilight walked back a bit. " She is related to you? She looks like a... Monster..." Twilight muttered, but Celestia could still hear." She is a Monster..." Celestia said" How did she end up like this? Did she use to be good?" Twilight asked" Yes, i just don't know what happened to her..." Celestia answered while sighing.The Pony was staring at the two Princesses, listening to their conversation and let out a fake sigh of sadness." Oh Why ever did you need to put me here? Ive been so bored, nopony even knows i exist except for you and Luna and a few others, like the guards, oh please let me go..." Umbra said, trying to earn her freedom, faking her sadness." I know faking your sadness Umbra..." Celestia groaned while rolling her eyes." Pfft, me Fake? Why ever would i fake?" Umbra said with a un-amused face

    Twilight looked at the Alicorns
    hooves ( the alicorn in the cell/cage) and noticed, 1 of her shoe's were broken, ripped apart..." And what are YOU looking at?!" The Dark Alicorn spat" Your shoes, they are torn" Twilight pointed out." Of course they are, and is that a problem Twilight?" Umbra said, while letting her waving mane under Twilight's Chin, lifting it up." W-what? H-how do you know my name?" Twilight gasped.

    /Enough for now, making the next part\
     

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