The Poor Alicorn

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  1. Shadowbolt

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    This fanfiction is about a Pony named Shadowbolt who moves from Ponyville to Canterlot. A student gets killed, and everyone blames him. He must find out who really did it to clear his name.


    Life in Ponyville was simple. Fillies played under the trees, and ponies went about their business as if nothing was wrong. I loved it. I even had a girlfriend. Her name was Falling Star, and our relationship was perfect. If I didn’t have to move to Canterlot, we would’ve considered getting engaged. I hate Canterlot, it’s so fru-fru and everyone wears monocles, and Top Hats, and they’re too busy walking around with their heads turned up, and their eyes closed. I think five ponies bumped into me just this morning. Life in a new city is hard, especially when you have a name like Shadowbolt.
    Everyone thinks I’m evil just because of my name, and it really sucks. If I wanted to serve Nightmare Moon, then I would’ve run away years ago. I try to explain that to people, but they don’t listen. Instead, they laugh at me and call me names. On top of that, I’m an Alicorn. I have wings, and a Unihorn. I’m so sick of everyone calling me a freak. When I finish school, I’m going back to Ponyville. I started my first day of school in Canterlot. I could barely keep from crying when I went to the office. All I could think about was how all of my friends, and Falling Star, would be starting up at Ponyville High School. That creep Lancer would be hitting on her, she would reject him, and she would say that she would say that she belongs to me ,and me only. That’s why I’m in love with her. I will do anything to get her back, even if I have to die for it.
    The empty halls of Canterlot high were decoerated with marble, and pillars with busts of Famous unicorns prancing in a heroic manner. I felt like a nervous pony model at her first fashion show. I reached my classroom, Room 406, Equestria History with Mrs. Peach. The Door felt like a portal to an unknown universe. I took a breath, and opened it.
    “Class, This is Shadowbolt.” Introduced Mrs. Peach. “He will be joining this class, and he has moved here from Ponyville.” Most of the class turned up their noses at me like I was a piece of stale cheese. I expected it, I had a hard time adjusting in Ponyville, it was like nothing had changed. I took a seat in the back of the room, where no one would notice me. I was wrong, immediately three ponies started to throw pieces of crumpled up paper at me. I opened them, and they said things like; “You’re only here because you won the Pony Lottery, and “ Go Back to your tree, you freak of the Earth.” Each note catalyzed more and more anger that welled up inside of me with each passing note. I couldn’t take it. “Whose throwing these stupid notes at me?!” I exclaimed. Three Unicorns sitting a couple rows away from me giggled to themselves. They turned around and acted like nothing happened. I assume that they were the culprits. “Idiots.” I muttered. And turned back to Mrs. Peaches History lesson.
     

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