I cant use a USB atm so im using this forum to begin on my story... Its based on a shot vid i watched called 'once upon a time in canterlot' It was about (background, what we didn't see in the episode that the changeling attack) a mare fighting for her life against a few changelings. ok lets start main character will be my OC Czarina Alizarin and some other background characters as well..... (Still typing if there is nothing here yet) - - Auto Merge - - Czar sat there, there wasn't much for her to do but listen to all the ponies jabber on, about what they have been doing for the last 'year or so'. She sat by a long rectangular table, that sat in a long rectangular room. She thought to herself as she stared at the door on the other side of the room. She then took a piece of paper out of her saddlebag that sat behind her and started to read it. It was another document that she was working on and she took a small quill out of her bag. She began to underline and cross out words and adding in new ones like she was editing it. She placed the quill on the table and read through the document again. After reading it she turned her head to the right, to look out the window. The window was large and it was easy to see the castle through it. She remembered that it was also 'The Big Wedding' today. Well everypony knows about it and its hard to even forget about it, in fact the ponies around her at the moment are stating to talk about it. "Well now..." Said the stallion at the end of the table. "Shall we get back on topic?" All the other ponies started to nod and say 'yes' or 'you right sir' as Czar sid the piece of paper back into her saddlebag. "Ok, thank you. Who was next?" He read through the papers that sat under his for hooves. "Oh. Czarina, who couldn't forget that name, heh. Well, why not tell us how your time in ponyville was? She stood up on all fours. "Well its a nice place, lots of nice and cheerful ponies there too. But, i wouldn't say that just because it is a 'small town' there are no jobs down there. In fact the first few weeks i was swamped with clients and work. I was a busy pony and i can tell you, ponyville is a great place to work. Anyways, i have concluded references in my report and if really wanted me to show you i have a copy of my report here too." "Thank you Czarina, well now you all know that ponyville isn't just a place filled with dumb townsponies with apple bucking talents. In fact, i was raised there myself." He was about to talk again but one of the ponies pointed out the window and others tired to look past the stallion. He stood up and examined in a calm tone. "I know, can we all get back on track? Please. Some of us have more important things to do, after this meeting is done." The others including Czar still stared out the window, some standing on all fours and others looked a bit shocked. One of the ponies that sat beside him tapped on his shoulder. "I, think you should look out side..." He turned his whole body to see what was going on.
(ok so i made a start) - - Auto Merge - - She woke with a gasp for air, suddenly her eyes opened and she was staring at the ceiling. She rolled to her side to stare the mess that covered the room. Oh Celestia was it horrifying, ponies scattered all over the room. Lifeless and just laying there, not even a twitch or a heart beat. She didn’t know what to do, so she stood up on all fours and turned away from the ‘mess.’ There was a big gaping hole in the side of the building, as big as the room itself. She could see green bolts flying straight down into streets and other buildings. She stood there, watching what could be an invasion but it was all too late for her to think, a green bolt was coming straight towards her and she didn’t even notice it, at all. Something white and tall rammed into her pushing her into the wall and temporally knocking her out. She groaned and opened her eyes, there was a white stallion there and flickers of green bounced off of his gold amour. It was a guard to be sure but he had his hoof on something. Something black and ponylike, trying to get up, fighting at the guard’s hooves. “Get out of here now. You’re not safe here!” The guard said facing the black figure. She stood up and stared at the two, scared and shaking at the hooves. “Now! Quickly!” She stared directly at the guard and made a break for it, straight out of the hole on the building were the guard stood. She ran straight past them, jumping out of the building from the third floor and landing onto the rubble that laid on the second. She made her onto the street with ease, landing on all fours and staring down at the black figure that landed in front of her. It was lifeless and she turned her head up to stare at the guard. He stared down at her and pointed down the street “Go now. Before more come.” She ran and he flew off, following her but just above her. She didn’t notice him at all. All she wanted to do was get away from here. She didn’t know what was going on. She made her way down the street as the guard flew above her. “Find somewhere safe. Before more---“He was rammed in the side by a green bolt, crashing into the ground below. She stopped and turned, another black figure was standing on top the guard, beating him in the face. She could try to do something to help the poor stallion. But she couldn’t. For some reason her magic wasn’t working. So she ran into it, ramming her fore hooves into the black figure and yelling out “Get off him!” The black figure didn’t even notice her, it was too interested in beating the guard to death. It was surprised that a simple little pony would do something like this. It got straight up, without even a sign of pain and stared at the two, evilly. She was helping the guard back up as the black figure sent a green burst up into the air. “Let more come” It said “None of you ponies will survive. None of you!” The stallion got back onto his hooves. His snout bruised and in most places bleeding. “Go now…I…can hold them off” “No. I can—“ She wanted to help him but he yelled louder than her. “Go now!” She stepped back and stared at him and he did the same but he quickly turning his head to face black figure. It was too busy laughing at the two. “OH go on. We will just find you, later.” “Go now, while, you still have time.” She ran as fast as she could behind into a nearby alleyway, hiding behind a crate. The black figure was too busy staring down with the guard and just in a few seconds more of the black figures arrived. They surrounded the stallion, with no possible way for him exit, not even a gap for him to fly or even run out of. He stood there staring down at the first black figure. “Come on…get on with it then!” He said. Some of the black figures cracked their necks and hooves, like they were clinched fists. Others stared down at him and grinned evilly. She could see all of this from behind that crate in the alleyway. She could see how scared he was, even if he wasn’t even showing it. She knew what was to come. So she dropped and hid behind the crate, wishing she could do something to help him. But she couldn’t and she closed her eyes tightly as she could hear the sound of them beating him. It was only seconds until the beating stopped. She could hear them speak, about her and the stallion. “Wasn’t there another?” “It will be found soon enough. Let it run while it can.” “Yes master.” The rest said in unison She could her them fly off, well (still more to go) - - Auto Merge - - She could her them fly off, well she could hear buzzing instead of feathers flapping but that didn’t matter. She could still hear a voice. “I know you’re in there, pony. Go on. Run. Survive.” It buzzed off and left her there. She slowly peered over the crate to see where it went but it wasn’t visible. She looked left and right to see if there were others still around but there were none. She slowly began to rise, to view the empty street. She made her way around the crate, quickly looking left and right to see if there were more of the black figures in the street. There were none but she was still cautious. She walked down the street in a pace, quickly turning her head every second to see if there was one behind her. She was making her down the empty street, towards an intersection but she could hear buzzing. She quickly ran and hid behind some rubble. The buzzing stopped and she could hear hoofsteps walking down the street, not towards her but they sounded close. - - Auto Merge - - (still more )
