Here's a small WIP I plan to finish some time in the future. It's a theme to the fan-made Super Rainbow Dash. Critique is wanted. [SOUNDCLOUD]https://soundcloud.com/thunder-dash-alternative/pushed-wip-h[/SOUNDCLOUD]
The unison of all of the instruments is cool, but I feel like it could use some harmony and some bass (even though the organ does an okay job at covering the bass part). Beginning should be quiet to lead into the loud chorus. The Rainbow Dash quote sounds a bit distorted. Not quite sure why.
For the Rainbow Dash quote, I doubled it, with the second signal delayed by a few milliseconds. I also added some reverb to it. I tried to get that Dragonball Z super saiyan voice sound effect. But I'll change some of the harmonies.
The double signal sounds awesome, but I suggest a little bit less reverb: reduce the room size, reduce the decay, and increase the high-cut. Optionally, if you didn't do this, instead of having to make a whole new signal for the quote, you could try adding a delay effect in the mixer (add it before the reverb).
