I'm aware of the flaws, but I don't feel that the idea was good enough in the first place to warrant rewriting. Just a little something that might be mildly entertaining. Tell me what you think. http://fav.me/d5r750q
That was especially interesting to me. I'm a fan of both Star Wars and Star Trek, so I love the whole space-battle premise. Any particular reason why you didn't like the idea?
It's cheesy and unoriginal. Sure, I can put twists in it, but it's just the same old stuff that's been written about since the 1980's. Glad you liked it, though.
I'm not really a Sci-Fi fan but I found myself interested in the story. I think you did a great job! You're a great writer. I loved how you started with story and then went back to explain the background before moving forward. Great job!
