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  1. smittyquill

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    Would you be so kind as to read this poem I wrote? I'd love it if you would. I've had a stream of writers block for sometime now and Id like someone to help dust the rust off.
    Rise and Learn


    Bring sunny days, Rest dark nights.
    Rise the joyous birds, and singing summer sprites.
    So that every man, woman, and child may do their part.
    And relish in the bountiful fortunes they provide.

    For long we have waged this war on hunger and greed.
    And always take forgranted what we really need.
    For when we wake and it is no longer there.
    And the value of reputation becomes no more than air.

    We wont always live.
    But we never die.
    Sure you may fall.
    But you can always rise.

    Walk the sea and climb the stars.
    Lasso the moon and give your all.
    And when the deed is done, feel your scars.
    Then spread your lesson to any and all.


    ​By Arin Smith
     
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    You've got quite the talent there :) Keep working at it, every great writer has their writer's block
     
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    I'm not one for poems... that being said, good work!
     
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    Thanks guys! It means alot, i thought i had lost the talent for awhile. I got a bunch more and I'd like to put them up. Should I make new threads or blog them?
     

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