Damaged Sticks

So this is my newest OC Lmelra( just call her L-ra for short LOL)

Name Lemelra(L-ra)
Raceeer
Gender:Female
Cutie Mark: It's like Celestia's but red
Special Talent:She can raise the moon and sun


Okay, some back story and then the fan fic idea.


She is the daughter of Luna, you don't see it in the show cause it's a secret LOL. She was born on the moon that's why she is blue. She got back to ponyville when she helped fight nightmare moon. You didn't see it cause she was on the moon LOL. After the fight Luna was like really mad at her and made her stay in the castle(Luna is so mean :GGRRR Any way, she's been in the castle since that day. Until she decided to runaway, thats the real story, so you'll just have to wait.

I little bit about herself.

She is loved buy the ponies in ponyville and canterlot. She's like really kind and helpful. She always helps a pony in need no matter what they've done to her. She doesn't like mean ponys or gilda. (boo gilda and Trixie). She has those bands around her legs cause they control her magic. They control the elements of harmony. Yep, she can control all 8 of them. I know their is only 6 but others are a secret hidden from the ponies. The other 2 elements show up in the story(spoiler LOL). All of her horns can do magic, like cast three spells at once, this makes her stronger then her sister Celestia. Her wings are stronger then almost all other ponies, she can a double dark boom. It's like the sonic rainboom only darker. Okay now on to the storie.


It's just a average day in ponyville when L-ra hears her sister Candance scream from the other room. She runs into the room and sees Nightmare moon is back. Nightmare moon then leaves and goes to ponyville. She steals the elements of harmony and then frees Discord. They both go to Queen Crisiylis, they all team up and try to beat up the mane six. L-ra goes to ponyville and meets the mane 6. Then Discord appears and tells them they have to find the Elements. L-ra uses her elements in her power bands to turn him into stone. One baddie down, 2 to go. They go searching for the other elements so the main six can help. They have to travel all over Equestria. First they go to Cloudsdale. They met Trixie and her and L-ra get into a fight! After the fight L-ra lets Trixie join(what????) They find the fist element in the cloud. Then they got to canterlot. They get the second Element for Celestia. On the way to Baltimare, they get tired so they make a camp. They only have 7 tents and there is 8 ponies(what do they do?!1?1!!) L-ra is nice enough to share with Trixie because all the other ponie are to mean to share. While in the tent Trixie says she love L-ra, but L-ra is dating Rarity.(LOL, there is no clop, That's so gross) They all wake up and go to applelosa to get the 4th element. L-ra tells Rarity what Trixie said about her loving her. Rarity beats up Trixie and They then go to Ponyville to get the 6th element, but nightmare moon is waiting for them. L-ra uses her speed to run into Nightmare. While she is on the ground, she tells the group that a pony they trust is a traitor. L-ra turns her to stone using her Elements. They all get in a big fight and they all got different ways. But L-ra knows that none of them are Traitors, she uses her 7 th element trust to get them all together. The friends go to Queen Chrysalis and demand she give up. she does not give up and they all fight. L-ra uses the elements to turn her into stone. They make camp because its to far away from home. In the morning rarity finds out she is pregnant(who could be the daddy??1!?) They go back to Canterlot and tell Celestia that they won. She tells them that's good, but then she kicks L-ra. She is knocked out. The mane six and trixie fight her and are beaten up, she wakes up and uses the 8th element the element of love. her love for her sister makes Celestia turn back to normal. Equestria is back to normal and Rarity has alicorn baby. The daddy was L-ra, Rarity and her live together and have a happy faimly after saving equestria.

That's my story guys, what do you think. NO FLAMING OR HATING OR I'LL TELL THE MODZ AND YOU WILL BE BANED.

[size=-5]Disclaimer, the above was for LULZ. Please don't hate me or become offended by anything above.[/size]

Spoiler: For the LULZ

The above was is a Parody of the title of Broken Branches, in name only. The mess above is nothing like my legit story. Enjoy or don't

 

Don't call it bad. It's a work in progress. I need more time LOL.

 

Sttop FlAming myy Story your just made you'res isn't as great.

-- Sent from my Palm Pre using Forums

 

I proved it!

No one reads full posts of any kind. I put 2 disclaimers in the bottom.

The spoiler tag is even called for the LULZ.


This thing I wrote above is in no way a reflection of my writing skills. I did it for LULZ and for a little fun.

 

DING DING DING.

thank you.

Plus look a L-ra. She looks......to say the least, bad, just bad looking.

 

Then you should have seen the disclaimers saying I did it for fun. This is why I don't make jokes here. They get taking to serious.

 

The OP was me. I wrote the abomination.

If you read the disclaimers at the bottom, it says I did it for the LoLZ. LOLZ mean that it wasn't serious.

 

I thought it was good. It's a good example of how not to do stuff.