Hey guys, this is a work in progress fic. I'm at a little hiccup right now in plot, so it's completely open for critique. I will fix eveverything I can after I am completely done with it the first time. I'm trying to get this fic to be perfect. Anything you see (Change in mood too fast, odd tones, weird dialogue, improper directions, etc.) feel free to address. I would post it all here, but it's fairly long. Be aware of that before you start reading. I also suggest you read with the music included, but it's not necessary. Story: http://docs.google.com/document/d/1...aJVvfA6GV3k0O4/edit?hl=en_US&authkey=CJ7Xl-AI Music: http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch/?v=nd9qQiwhP5U
When you said it was long, you weren't kidding, huh? Anyway, I'll have a crack at it myself in the morning. It's getting a bit on the late side here.
Okay I WILL read this after I finish the other story I'm reading or at work tonight. It's saved to my favorites. If I don't get to it before the thread dies, I'll just PM you what I thought. Oh and thanks for showing me that song, I now have inspiration for my project. It's kind of a secret ,but I'll share when I finally get it done. (Sidenote- Sliverpony is awesome)
