Elements of Peace (Revised and Recasted)

I did a lot of thinking about the series, and thinks it's time to take it on a new path. This path adds more originality to the story and gives each character well, more character. Instead of 1 character being the MANE protagonist, I am going to make the series seen through the eyes of all 6. I will even put in a brief time into their younger years. This way everypony will know how they all became and met. I made new profiles and changed some names. I need some ratings and critic now before I begin going head-on into the project. Rate it between 1 and 10.. 10 being best. And give me some critic on what you think needs changed. any recommendations are enjoyed. Now, meet the cast!


Name: SilverBolt "Silva"
Place of Birth: Cloudsdale
Breed: Pegasus Male
Element: Courage
Cutiemark: Speed
Job: Mail Delivery
Family: Rainbow Dash (Adopted Sister)
Friends: DustFlare, MoonGazer
As a Colt: SilverBolt was an oprhan since birth. He was left on the steps of a orhpanage by his unknown parents. While there he would become close friends with RainbowDash whom he considered his sister. That was until one fateful day when he decided to go flying and went flying into Canterlot without worrying about anything. There he encountered MoonGazer and DustFlare, both whom had no homes and were relying on eachother to survive. Silverbolt, having no home decided to go with them and begin adventuring.


Name: DustFlare "Dusty"
Place of Birth: Canterlot
Breed: Unicorn Male
Element: Empathy
Cutiemark: Magic
Job: Fruit Farmer
Family: StarDust
Friends: SilverBolt, MoonGazer
As a Colt: DustFlare was born into a happy farming family. One night would change his life, and that was the night his house caught fire by the fireplace he forgot to attend to. Dusty was the only survivor of the fire and would live with regret for the rest of his life, blaming himself for what happened. Instead of getting help, the emotionally scarred colt ran, and ran. He would soon bump into a filly known as MoonGazer who could sense a problem with the crying colt. MoonGazer eventually helps him out and they begin travelling together. In the future they would meet SilverBolt who would join them and he would Suggest they stay together because together they we're stronger and had a better chance of surviving.


Name: MoonGazer 'Moon"
Place of Birth: Manehattan
Breed: Earth Pony Female
Element: Compassion
Cutiemark: Divination
Job: None
Family: Rarity (Cousin)
Friends: DustFlare, SilverBolt
As a Filly: MoonGazer was the daughter of a rich couple. This family was a side of Rarity's family that caused the unicorn to wish to be more of a "high-class" pony. MoonGazer however hated all the attention and how boring life had become. As a filly she ran away from home in order to find a more adventurous life. She would eventually find herself growing more worried as she made her way into Canterlot. The lost filly would get some help as well once she encountered DustyFlare whom she helped out. It wouldn't be long after until she met SilverBolt and soon they all became close friends.


Name: StarDust "Star"
Place of Birth: Canterlot
Breed: Unicorn Female
Element:
Cutiemark: Magic
Job: Professional Student
Family: DustFlare
Friends: OrangeCream, CherryBloom
As a Filly: StarDust was born into a regular family in Canterlot and was considered just another unicorn. But once she got into Celestia's school for gifted Unicorns she really took off into her popularity. Stardust was Celestia's highest ranked student in both skill and knowledge. Even for a small Filly she outclasses many other students older than her which caused a bit of a pride problem. The Filly rubbed it in others faces a bit and she ended up having almost no friends. When she heard Celestia took a personal student, she grew angry because she wasn't chosen. She got so upset she left the school and decided to leave to get stronger. It wasn't until she would encounter DustFlare that she realized another pony who had a special talent with magic that rivalled hers. This upset her even more and she ended up running off into a town called Ponyville where she would encounter CherryBloom who would help her out. The unicorn then set her mind that she would become the strongest Unicorn alive and earn Celestias attention.


Name: Cherrybloom "Cherry"
Place of Birth: TrottingHam
Breed: Earth Pony Female
Element: Love
Cutiemark: Music Making
Job: Musician
Family: N/A
Friends: StarDust, OrangeCream
As a Filly: CherryBloom was born in the town of Trottingham. But as a young filly her parents moved to Ponyville. The Lovey-Dovey filly was quick to try making friends, and never let rejection get her down. But eventually all good things come to an end. She soon grew very sad once a bunch of other's made fun of her for being a runt and not having a cutiemark. It was thanks to a pony known as Pinkamena Diane Pie that she would get that spark back in her heart with nothing other than a good party. This friendship would eventually become key in the future, and the two fillies never knew it. During that party Cherry would encoutner OrangeCream who was also having issues, but got helped out by Cherry. Not long after that she would encounter a very emotinal StarDust who she helped get into a happy mood.


Name: OrangeCream
Place of Birth: Cloudsdale
Breed: Pegasus Female
Element: Humility
Cutiemark: Cooking
Job: Chef
Family: N/A
Friends: CherryBloom, StarDust
As a Filly: OrangeCream was a happy-go-lucky filly that was considered insane or mental. (Why is it always pegasai who are mental?) Sh would laugh about everything and she NEVER got sad. No matter who insulted her she would shrug it off and move on, never holding a grudge on anypony. Even though deep down inside, the filly did get hurt by the words, she kept her mind set that everypony just had a misunderstanding of her. One day she finnally caved and let emotion from within come out. The happiest pony in Cloudsdale became a real grouchy filly and abandoned everything in cloudsdale. Down in Ponyville, closest town she could find, Orange would encounter A certain pink filly that helped her remember who she was and get that happy spark back. She was then introduced to Cherry and they became best friends, until they met StarDust who became close firends as well.