My first fiction... War for Equestria (not final title)

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  1. Parker Izing

    Parker Izing Well known member. NOT.
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    The idea is Equestria is a region of planet Mobius, an actually post apocalliptic Earth, where the out of federation kingdom of Equestria is called for help onn the decisive final blow agaist the techno tyrant, Dr Ivo Robotnik...

    Characters: All of MLP universe would star or being referenced.

    on planet Mobius we have:

    Dulcinea "Dulcy" the dragon
    Sonic the hedgehog
    Miles "tails" Prower
    Princess Sally Alicia Acorn
    Doctor Ivo "eggman" Robotnik

    and whoever I see fit.


    What I got done:

    War for Equestria and the planet.

    Alternate Universe. Crossover, OC’s




    Early morning, the skies over Ponyville.


    The distinctive figure of a Dragon flies to the city of Canterlot, clinging on the side of a mountain.

    The dragon , en-route towards the city, must deliver a message of dire importance to princess Celestia, fate of the world relies on it.


    Plaza in the Canterlot Castle.

    Two armoured stallions cross their paths under an Oak…

    Guard 1: Hey Quill, told you the last one about Trixie?

    Quill: Today Ruby? Just twice… -His wings move showing it’s tiredness almost as valid as roll eyes…

    Ruby: Come on! It’s hotter than last one! The Princess Luna told me just 1 hour ago!

    Quill said “Wohoo!” on an obvious sarcastic way. Suddenly the birdlife chilling in the garden trees flight away in unison, with hysterical shrieks of fear, a tall, plump dragon approaches to the plaza, loudly clapping it’s wings to reduce the speed to a mere hover, to land just before the guards.

    Quill and Ruby quickly retreat few hooves and with purposely rasp voice say in unison “Talk your will!”

    The dragon, lowers it’s head to the guard’s height, and with a soft feminine voice says:

    “It’s of dire importance for me to deliver a message to princess Celestia!”

    Quill and Ruby look to each other, puzzled and surprised at the same time, Ruby concentrates, and a shining red orb jumps of his horn, gaining altitude and apparently by it’s own volition, moving inside the castle.

    Princesses Lounge room.

    A marbled stance, with high columns and Alicorn golden statues, in the middle, over a red carpet, and on a tube couch, we find Two Alicorns, browsing on stationary and vividly exchanging impressions.

    Princess Celestia is showing to her sister, princess Luna, some old Parchments Twilight send her about the magic of friendship, when a red orb flies towards them, homing on Celestia’s horn, the orb makes contact and disappears . Celestia looks emptily, as she suddenly realizes the nature of the encapsulated through orb. “Luna, we got guests”
     
  2. ThePoeticPony

    ThePoeticPony Forgetful Pro

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    Saw this; just had to say. My OC/ponysona's called Quill :derpe:
     
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