"Nameless," a MLP fanfiction

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  1. Shred_Hexstring

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    [normal] our young protagonist wakes up in the everfree forest and is saved by Fluttershy. There seems nothing too unusual about him showing up and now living in ponyville, but something big is happening in this world. Could this new stranger somehow be related to these new events that are unfolding?


    http://KilomFrostPrower.deviantart.com/art/Nameless-chapter-01-245033001

    ^there's the URL to chapter 1. This is a My Little Pony fanfiction where the protagonist is NOT a pony. Don't worry though, this isn't another human in equestria fic. I'd like some real critique from you guys, I want to know what you ponies think.

    Note: this story introduces two alicorns other than Celestia and Luna. Here's my reasoning behind the names:
    Celestia(Stars and the Heavens)
    Luna(The freaking Moon)
    Gaia(Earth)
    Solaris(The Sun)

    I know Celestia raises the sun and Luna raises the moon, and I found it odd, since when I think "celestial," I think about the stars out there is space. I have a reason for creating Solaris, you'll see why in a later chapter. Enjoy.
     
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    Looks like we both used the same name for the earth mother though I know of only one other and it is a Warhammer Fantasy reference. I did however use a different name for sun.

    Good intro so far keep it up!!!
     
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