Road to Disharmony

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  1. McStudz

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    Well, this is my work in progress. I already have a few chapters up on FiMFiction.net, but I recently hit a major bout of writer's block.

    You can read my fic here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4512/Road-to-Disharmony

    Mainly, it's a Human in Equestria fic, with Discord as the antagonist. I haven't been getting much feedback, but when I do, people say really good things about this fic. One guy even said it's one of the best HiE fics he's read! (He also did the artwork for my fic)

    But I need help in writing my next chapter. I kind of wrote myself into a corner, and now I have no idea how to make the next little bit interesting. I want to have a chapter with Luna's debut in Ponyville, and then Discord comes in and all hell breaks loose or something, but I'm not entirely sure how I would do that.

    You can see what I've got so far for my next chapter here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Rco5ZqHyGYmkhD8pePMOu1juqxQGnhVf-CU5Vz_sd0/edit

    If you have any ideas, input, feedback or anything, please let me know. I want to hear it all. I need some ideas for what to do now. I've got some great ideas for the climax, but I still have three chapters t owrite before I even START to write for that!
     
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    ...I see that no one has anything to say about my fic, or they just don't care.

    C'mon guys! I need some input!
     

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