The Rush (W.I.P)

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  1. thaukbrony

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    The Main 6 decided to enter the Canterlot Cup, an all year round racing series which involves mechanical machines which have over 600PonyPower. The Machines are known as Stock Carts, and can go as fast as 200MPH, but when they arrive at the first circuit of the season they spot Discord and his team of evil minions. Will the main 6 win or will Discord clench the title of Canterlot 500 Legend.

    So chapter one is in the making. two paragraphs along and i have a block in my mind. Still trying to figure out a way to make it flow well.

    Chapter One: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110391/1/the-rush/chapter-one

    Please any thoughts please post.

    I will ignore any comments that dont back up the point. 'THIS IS BAD!!!' Yeah well why is it bad? Please justify your comments as much as possible.

    Thank you for reading :- THAUKBRONY
     

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